The cliffhangers and the catchy music is making it very hard for me to fall asleep tonight.
Can’t next Tuesday come any faster?? D:
Your title pages have really been evolving. You’re getting braver with the dramatic angles. The way Gear is partially cropped off of the page so you only see the knife, and the way you’ve got Steffi lying on the pavement rather than upright really adds a whole new dimension to this page. And the shift to hand-drawn rather than premade type after Track 5 helps set the atmosphere for each track. The way the blood seeps this track’s title is a nice touch too!
The only thing I can really, really nitpick about is just a suggestion. Since this track will take place in the rain, it would be really cool if you can add the reflections on the ground in addition to cast shadows. I’m aware that drawing reflections are a pain in the ass probably take you about 10x longer to draw each page, but I thought it would be pretty cool if you could do that in a few panels!
Yup Gear is my Favorite character I wonder how this will play out without non mech battle gear (no pun intended) like Gear or the raccoon Steffi is going to have a hell of a lot of work a head of her in gamer terms gear is going to be that one boss
oh! i forgot to ask, last year you came to EXP-con I was wondering if you were intending on comming again (because it looks like the con list hasnt been updated since last i looked i didnt know if it was because theres nothing else this year or not.
Okay, Raccoon, it is now officially okay to use all of your Raccoony gadgets to kill the hell outta someone.
…Don’t the law enforcement people in Cartoon York realize that ready access to cheap guns is the only thing that keeps us from having supervillains? It’s kinda hard to prance around in a dark-yet-vibrantly-colored costume stabbin’ people with your big electric knifey hands if half the audience is packin’ heat!
FINISHE HER!
I hope she doesn’t…It seems whenever Gear shows up,things ged grimdark.
SHE IS THE KNIGHT OF CERBERUS!
It’s her.
Homestuck memes aside, this page looks really awesome. Dunno how Steffi will get out of this one.
The cliffhangers and the catchy music is making it very hard for me to fall asleep tonight.
Can’t next Tuesday come any faster?? D:
Your title pages have really been evolving. You’re getting braver with the dramatic angles. The way Gear is partially cropped off of the page so you only see the knife, and the way you’ve got Steffi lying on the pavement rather than upright really adds a whole new dimension to this page. And the shift to hand-drawn rather than premade type after Track 5 helps set the atmosphere for each track. The way the blood seeps this track’s title is a nice touch too!
The only thing I can really, really nitpick about is just a suggestion. Since this track will take place in the rain, it would be really cool if you can add the reflections on the ground in addition to cast shadows. I’m aware that drawing reflections are a pain in the ass probably take you about 10x longer to draw each page, but I thought it would be pretty cool if you could do that in a few panels!
Yup Gear is my Favorite character I wonder how this will play out without non mech battle gear (no pun intended) like Gear or the raccoon Steffi is going to have a hell of a lot of work a head of her in gamer terms gear is going to be that one boss
So this is the Kiwiblitz OP?
Is the animation normal and action-packed like Soul Eater? Or Shinbo-tastic?
The blood in the track title is creepy
This comic gets more awesome with every new page. Also, the title song is amazing. Do want!
This page has made me realize I really like your style.
Sh1t just got real (O_O(\ )
Title page is awesome!
Also.. Arghh! More waiting! *Tries to pull self up from cliff*
OMG. Cube, you’re a Pendulum fan too~! XD In other news…
The new Track cover looks awesome! Your perspective of the rain is stupendously amazing.
>.< nonononono are you kidding me!? Ive been so caught up with school i haven`t been checking anything i finally catch up and now aaaaarg
ok ok next Tuesday isn`t too far away right? I can handle this right!?
oh! i forgot to ask, last year you came to EXP-con I was wondering if you were intending on comming again (because it looks like the con list hasnt been updated since last i looked i didnt know if it was because theres nothing else this year or not.
this track cover is just awesome. dang it I can’t wait until Tuesday!
Okay, Raccoon, it is now officially okay to use all of your Raccoony gadgets to kill the hell outta someone.
…Don’t the law enforcement people in Cartoon York realize that ready access to cheap guns is the only thing that keeps us from having supervillains? It’s kinda hard to prance around in a dark-yet-vibrantly-colored costume stabbin’ people with your big electric knifey hands if half the audience is packin’ heat!
Awesoooooooooome!!! Just read the whole last issue. It’s growing very nice. Great work! =D
Did her hair get uncurled by the rain?
Oh! I like the viewpoint and the water ripples! It looks so cool!
OH GOOD THING ITS NEVER TOO LATE TO COMMENT: MY FAVORITE COVER PAGE SO FAR; they just keep getting better!! owo and bloody letters are a classy touch
@Patches Soul Eater!!!!!!!! All anime spases aside this comic is awsome!!!!!!
Those sound like naff lyrics.
Pfffft.